bsf rough draft 1

[dubdobdee]

"completed" as 12,000 words, largely by reaching a point where i realised i didn;t have the will to process everything that remains (also know as halfway haha eugh) -- i think it will need some important small stuff imported from the later sections; it is currently very wonky and badly shaped

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rough draft aka

[dubdobdee.livejournal.com]

1: plunge deep into the weeds
2: wave arms around wildly
3: goto step 1

Re: rough draft aka

[dubdobdee.livejournal.com]

for those who never saw it, the essay it's (sorta kinda) further thoughts on is here

[petronia.livejournal.com]

Probably cannot comment on this usefully at all, but when I know a lot of people who'd be interested in reading it once it's done.